The Official Writing Challenge
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02/22/08
Your writing skills are very evident--good job!

I'd have liked more details here; I'm still not clear of exactly what happened at this church. And I don't know how the saying ties in...

I liked the hope and grace evident in this entry.
02/22/08
Some excellent imagery here - I felt like I was there with you, fighting the battle.

I would have loved some specifics here - just to have an idea of exactly what was going on. It seemed a bit vague to me.

Very nicely done.
If only we would all learn that valuable lesson that indeed the battle does belong to the Lord.
Nice writing i liked it!
02/23/08
I really love those last two paragraphs! Beautifully said. Now if only we can remember that when things are hard!