The Official Writing Challenge
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02/02/08
A fine story if a bit of a literal example of the proverb.
02/03/08
I could almost feel the radiating heat. Well-written, but perhaps too close to a literal interpretation of this week's prompt?

The narrator has an engaging voice; I enjoyed this.
Very well written. I love archeology, thus making this story even more enjoyable to read!
02/05/08
I liked the symmetry of beginning with the cup of coffee and end with the finding of the tea cup. Engaging narrative. Keep writing!
02/05/08
I liked how the MC amused himself while he worked.
"If Indiana Jones could teach, so could I."

Be careful about using words that are in the topic, like glitter.
02/06/08
I enjoyed reading this because my secret ambition as a child was to be an archaeologist. But, it DOES seem like a lot of work int the hot sun for very little reward. Good characterization.
02/07/08
Very clever - love the end, and your characterization is wonderfully done. Great title too!