The Official Writing Challenge
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How terrifying!

Be careful of run-on sentences and comma splices.

Even though it was a terrible nightmare, it was a blessing to have that dream because of the realization it brought.
This caught my attention and emotion right away. It was breathless. I was surprised to find it only a dream. It undoubtedly has helped you in recognizing the importance of your precious children. The only thing I can offer on your writing is that it would be easier to read with more white space. In other words, if you could separate the paragraphs, it would help. You undoubtedly can write. Keep at it.