The Official Writing Challenge
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11/24/07
Very creative - I didn't see this coming. This is as solid and uncompromising as the Preacher. Keep writing.
I'm glad that I choose to read your entry. Very smooth and to the point. Thanks.
11/28/07
Loved the voice and the delivery. Great job! Only suggestion I might offer to make is to watch the word that. Try leaving a few of them out and see how much tighter your sentence is:)) You are very good at this!
02/26/08
Love the title, the preface, the sermon, the briefness and the spirit poured into this piece. As for me and my house..."I'll take it - as the Gospel!" Another fine entry, and sorry I've been derelict in keeping up as of late with one of my favorite Wordsmiths - just life's problems, that's all. But you make them fly away...and I thank you.