The Official Writing Challenge
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10/11/07
This is a beautiful scene. You described it in such a believable way that I could picture being there. Gorgeous imagery:

"With the song of the woods as our only accompaniment, the multitude of our voices rang across the open meadow, rustling the sparrows into action from a nearby tree. A cappela never sounded as good as it did that day with God’s creation as our auditorium. The echo resounded joyfully in exquisite harmony as the Amen ended." Ah...Let the "Amens" begin, I say...
10/13/07
Wonderful descriptions - you have a gift for creating a sense of place. Lovely.