The Official Writing Challenge
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I enjoyed this, but then, it strikes a chord with me. My dad was always taking us into nursing homes- first as a pastor then as an administrator. Then I worked as a caregiver for a year in a hospice. (I've known many a mr. mason.) I enjoyed the humorous surprise and the dialogue & story kept me involved the whole way. good job. :)
09/15/07
I really enjoyed this, your storytelling was light and fun but had a serious note too. In my opinion this is a winner, keep writing an keep up the good work.
09/16/07
Wonderful voice, very funny and also tender. One of my favorites.
09/17/07
Thanks for the helpful information about the right way to put on boxer shorts:) Might come in handy someday! Great job!
Laury
09/17/07
A delight to read. My wife had the same job many years ago... she put an old gentleman on the toilet, turned and left the building. She came home crying. As far as we know ehw man is still on the potty.