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09/08/07
A very sad beginning to one's life if this is a true account. I would have liked to have seen(or read) where or when the love of Christ permeated the MC's soul and replaced all the ugliest that had been placed there. That was the only thing missing, a few typos but other than that a good job.
09/10/07
I'm amazed by the strength God must have instilled in you to be able to endure all this pain. And your happy ending makes me grateful the Lord can always redeem the things done to a child in anger by giving His total love and healing to that battered soul. God bless you for being so open and honest and for sharing your heart-felt story.
09/14/07
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