The Official Writing Challenge
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09/08/07
Wow, this is certainly right on topic for "bold!" You've created a wonderful character in your Maria.

One thing that detracted from the reading experience of this powerful story was the number of errors in punctuation and word choice. You might consider brushing up on some of those picky writing skills.

I'm always moved by stories of courage in the camps. Thank you for sharing this one.
09/09/07
Very moving story. I too was put off by the use of so many semi-colons, I realized that Faithwriters have members from all over the world so maybe that is acceptable where you are from. Keep writing.
09/11/07
Though the horrors of the camps are the topics of the most vivid stories we hear about, the courageous acts that went on in them were there for the telling, also. Thanks for giving me a story from that terrible time that is the epitome of boldness!
09/14/07
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