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This is a nice story.
This would be a great story for children. The moral is perfect for the primary to middle years group!
This sounded like so many discussions I had with my sister growing up. I think you captured that aspect of sibling rivalry. I was caught off-guard with Nanny having twins. What a good twist to the story and a perfect solution to who got the "kid". :)
Cute story. I could just see those little goats, and the girls arguing was definitely realistic! I'd like to know what kinds of adventures they had once the kids were old enough to play. ;)
Sibling rivalry. This is a good example. I liked how they resolved it.