The Official Writing Challenge
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05/17/07
A nice glimpse into what it could very well be like. I liked the way the church blended the tech with the human component, all pointing to the real answer - Jesus.
05/17/07
ps - "Some musicians played music" is just a bit redundant -but otherwise, a well written piece :)
05/17/07
I enjoyed the contrast between the "virtual" and the "physical" world, even with all the advances of society, peace was still found in Him. Well written!
05/18/07
This kept me interested all the way through. I especially liked the message that all people in every time need Jesus, and that people need fellowship.
05/19/07
Very good!
05/22/07
Wow. I really enjoyed reading this. Very nicely written and a great idea. It's fine this length but would also be great as a short story. Well Done!
05/24/07
Congratulations on your highly commended. This story is very good, and way too real. This seems like the beginnings of a longer story. -- Sheri
05/24/07
Congratulations, Seema. :)
This is a good science fiction article. Well written.
06/25/08
Wow! This was great ... and a very enjoyable read! Great job Seema!