The Official Writing Challenge
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04/20/07
*snicker* this was great!!
Too funny! :-) Thanks for the laugh.
Clever title and very funny end note. I loved this poem. A winner in my book. Great job.
This is cute. I did notice some verb errors here. But the overall poem was delightful, in a "gaging" sort of way.
04/24/07
The funniest part is the Title, especially after digesting(?) the poem. Although not exactly the sweetest poem I've ever read...it was the most creative...bar none! Very cute, but I admit I shuddered with pangs of nausea while I smiled. Nicely done (meter off a mite-but didn't take away from the ghastly & stinky accident) and I thought a very unique take on humor. Kudos!
04/24/07
so great..."no animals were harmed in the making of this poem" Some nice rhyming lines in there too, clever.
Very funny. I see why you won first place. You're a creative writer.
In Jesus' Name,
Patricia
Beth, When I was judging, I was overwhelmed by how you delicately handled your difficult topic with such skill. It was truly quite hilarious. Congratulations on your win! Blessings, Elizabeth
04/26/07
This is hysterical, what a great win for you! Congratulations!
Delicate subject indeed - but you handled it with great mirth that made it oh so enoyable. Congratulations on your win.
04/26/07
Excellent job! Humorous and just plain cute! Very creative, very imaginative. Don't look now but you've got talent! *No animals were harmed in this review, either! That was precious!
congrats on your first place! I liked this one :)
05/01/07
Very fun. No wonder you placed first! Congrats.
04/25/08
A clever work, this poem here
Took lots of time to do, methinks,
The writing skill I must revere
Although the subject matter stinks