The Official Writing Challenge
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03/03/07
Oh, my goodness I wouldn't forget that either! It's too bad that their game resulted in an injury but you told the story well and I enjoyed this take on the topic. Well done!
03/06/07
What an eye-catching title! A scary story--I was pretty sure someone would use this kind of "sewing" and you did it well.
You showed the mother's heart. Good job!
03/07/07
Definitely scary! Great title - and a well-written story to go with it :)
03/07/07
Excellent work here from the title right to the end. You had me holding my breath, you described the scene very well!
03/07/07
Oh my goodness. What a scary experience. He's blessed to have you as his mom.
Your title caught my attention and your experience wrenched my heart. It is very difficult to see our children hurt. Nice job.