The Official Writing Challenge
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03/03/07
Good job!
I loved the mending intwined with the the different family situations. I really enjoyed reading this piece. Great job.
Learning to pray for friends and family along with our chores is a good pov. Good job.
Doesn't it feel good to finish a task like that...all those things that you've put off? Your last sentence is great! I enjoyed your writing style.
03/05/07
I loved the way that the circumstances were joined together in the fabric of family life along with their garments. Good portrayal of a caring mom. Nice work