The Official Writing Challenge
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02/15/07
I loved this! The title drew me in and the dialogue just kept me involved until the end. I loved all the descriptions of scissors and different options, it was just a cute, sweet story with heart!
02/18/07
A fun story! Great detail.
02/21/07
This was intriguing--I would have like more exploration of the narrator's "shattered spirit" and the (strained?) relationship between her and her dad.
Caught me up right away. I could see this as a chapter in a longer story. Thanks
02/21/07
Good story, great dialogue! I loved how you slowly showed the narrator warming up to the card-maker.
02/21/07
Great story! I loved Sally--such a well-crafted character! :) I really enjoyed this!
02/21/07
What an enjoyable piece. Nice take on the topic and a fun read.
02/21/07
That was fun! The options blew me away,too, and I loved Sally's personality. Good job!
02/23/07
CONGRATULATIONS on a well-deserved win!! :)
02/23/07
This a gem! Congratulations! I so thoroughly enjoyed reading and experiencing this entry! I loved it.