The Official Writing Challenge
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Very powerful. This kept me reading to the end.
Awesome! Wow. Gripped my attention and wouldn't let go. Powerful. Moving. Ture. Fantastic. Giving my story a run for its money. Wonderful writing. There, I think I about covered it. ;)
How creatively beautiful! I love the weaving of the lyrics throughout the piece, and the ending in the present. Powerful writing!
I loved the line "...freedom calls her home..." That was just one of many, mnay wonderful lines in this beautiful, lyrical piece.
So, so lovely and true and wonderful. I love the buildup from Abraham to the present time - so wonderfully, poetically, and effectively done!
A creative and lyrical weaving of song and scripture. This held me all the way through. God bless xx
I love the way the song was woven through this piece. Well done! Thanks for sharing it!
Loved how you concluded this piece. Beautiful lyrics. Wonderful job!
Congratulations on your "Second Place" win! God bless you as you continue to grow in your gifts and talents! Very, very well done ... I love it!
Cheryl, 2nd place!!!! Super. Good job. Keep up the great work.
God bless.
Congrats on your 2nd place win. Way to go.