The Official Writing Challenge
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08/19/06
Terrific tale. It certainly kept my interest from beginning to end! Great job.
08/22/06
I grew up not far from there and know how quickly those waters can rise.

Good sytory, I really don't think you'll be on this level for long, your descriptions were wonderful!
08/23/06
Great story! You had me there in all the action and fear. Good writing!
08/24/06
WOW! Great job Donna. I loved this. Very deserving of the recognition it received. Keep up the GREAT work!!! God Bless.
08/24/06
What a beautifully woven tale with amazing description and action. Congratulations on your well-deserved win!
08/24/06
What a powerful story! You certainly deserve the prize. Congratulations (such a treat to "see" everything through the eyes of the six-year-old)!
Wow! What a gripping story, and so well-written. Great job! Congratulations!
09/09/06
Great Win! I just knew that baby would be born. :) This was a great story, and I was glad you shared your source of inspiration.