The Official Writing Challenge
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You make some great points. I think we all wish the world could be an idyllic place from time to time. I'd urge you to expand on your idea even more. Describe what you would do in a perfect world. Don't forget to use complete sentences and have someone proofread for you. You definitely covered the topic well. I think this time of the year, especially, we think about peace and what we can do to make the world a better place.
12/22/16
Congratulations, Irene, on placing 4th place in the Beginner category.

You have many good ideas to write about, but you just need to expand them.