The Official Writing Challenge
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07/29/16
Powerful in message and meaning. Thank you for sharing your story.

Blessings~
07/29/16
I could feel your emotion in this article, but I wanted more. You mention a dropped 'bomb', but did not give us the details- that confused me in terms of context for the rest of the story. Good descriptive writing though- keep at it.
You could build a short story on this one scene.

What came before to build up to this and then what followed to show that she had trusted God to some good end.

Nicely written.
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