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By Art Westefeld
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It is a song my wife could have sung. As a Christian husband, I don't need others to turn me on, but still, I have to say I have lucked out over thirty-three years of marriage.
She's five foot three inches of pure gorgeousness. Do we all change as we age? Of course. But she still looks youthful enough to have been mistaken for my daughter over a year ago. She has not lost her figure in that time and as I said looks young enough so I who look my fifty plus years can be accused of robbing the cradle. Her long brunette hair has not gone to silver. It is a rare woman who looks better than she did on her wedding day.
I am diabetic which means I need to give up most sweets, but not my life's companion, my only eye candy.
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Be careful about quoting lyrics. Because songs are so short, it doesn't take long to infringe on copyrights.
Plus, I'd love to seen those lines in your own words in order to get a better sense of the characters. For example: Back in the '70s, Captain and Tennille sang a song about looks going away with age. That wasn't something my wife ever needed to worry about. Even now, thirty-three years later, she still sends chills down my spine. Even better, her inner beauty blows away anything on the outside.
That might be a bit cheesy, but I went overboard a bit to show you what I meant. Keep writing, and keep telling your wife how beautiful she us. Nice job!
Others should take note of what you have written.
You touched my heart and made it smile...thanks for sharing.
Blessings~