The Official Writing Challenge
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Date
11/20/15
This is a very good reminder of "being salt and light." You expressed yourself clearly.
The content is beautiful.

I would like the content skillfully put into poetic form.

There is nothing wrong with the form you used, I just think it would make a very dramatic poetic reading by a skilled reader.

Keep writing using the form you feel most comfortable with.