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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 1 – Beginner)
Topic: Chillax (04/03/14)
Every time we travel in dreams, it all becomes a lost end of time,
Our Lord and Savior is always near to bring us words of rhyme.

We travel in dreams to a lost ending of time – our Lord
and Savior follows near to watch over all without a word.

Jesus is the Savior who sees quiet nights come and leave
within the dark and starry nights. He will call on angels from above.

Our Lord and Savior knows that we pray before we sleep,
and we even see our dear Savior near to watch over each one to keep.

Be thankful that the Lord is with us, for if we believe in His name,
and how He died and rose again. Praise Him and send a word to claim.

Pray to Him and talk in His way, He will never forget you night or day.
Braise Him in dreams – believe words in the Bible learn to repeat and say.

God is everything and Jesus is His Son who was crucified to save all from sin,.
we must praise Him every day not forgetting how He returned from the grave.
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Sheldon Bass 
04/11/14
Thank you for sharing your work here with us. Being a writer is a long journey and you are well on your way, having made the hardest leap by sharing. I hope you'll keep growing and learning with us. I enjoyed your piece. It has a good subject matter. And I look forward to your next entry. Keep moving forward.
C D Swanson 
04/11/14
Straight from your heart...that's one of the most important factors of writing, sharing from the heart, and you did just that.

God bless~
Larry Whittington
04/13/14
Very good thoughts in this poem.

I like where you said he brings us words that rhyme. God helps us be all he has made us for. He has given us our interests and talents.

You have an interest in poetry. Keep working at it.

Always let your work rest one day and then re-read it carefully word for word to make sure you have the words you really meant.

Good writing. Keep it up.
Judy Sauer 
04/14/14
Thanks for sharing your article. We have all been at the starting point and we all continue to learn and grow. That's the beauty of the challenge articles and feedback. We want each writer to excel. Keep writing. It's always helpful to review and read out loud the article in Preview mode before submitting. I've learned many gems the hard way. I know you meant Praise Him in your dream yet it reads Braise. Never stop writing since it comes from the soul.
Judy Sauer 
04/14/14
Oops! Many gems should read many times.