The Official Writing Challenge
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Cats are amazing creatures. I've watched mine often knowing something is brewing between them. Though I can't understand their meows often it is clear one cat is telling another off. Humans aren't that different at times are they? :)
11/06/10
As a cat person, I really loved the cat introduction and analogy.

I have mixed feelings about the ending...it's definitely a shocker, but I'm not sure if it helps to make your point or not. Have to think about that for a while.

Your conversation was so realistic that I felt as if I were eavesdropping, myself! Well done.
I thought the ending was great! Self righteousness 'exposed'! Put a smile on my face. Also loved the cats and the true to life descriptions of them!
11/20/10
I like this very much! THe different facets of gossiping. I thought the ending was purrrfect! We sure can get a little too full of ourselves and a tad self righteous!