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TITLE: Father to Daughter | Previous Challenge Entry
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Can’t you feel My presence?
Don’t you know who I am?
Don’t you know I love you?
Can you see the paths I’ve chosen for you?
Haven’t you heard I gave my son for you?
I’m your Father and I love you.
I see your life is going downhill.
Save yourself and give your life a chance.
I will never forsake you.
I will never leave you.
My love for you will always be here.
Life is worth living, never give up!
Do what I meant for you to do.
I will give you the desire to complete them.
It’s your choice,
How you will live your life.
Life will always be filled with trials.
You will always face circumstances.
Trials will come and go.
It’s Me you need to trust.
I’m your Father!
I will always love you.
Don’t ever forget this!
Hold my hand and follow me.
You’re my daughter,
And I’m your Father.
My love will sustain you.
I’ll comfort you in your pain.
In My arms I’ll keep you safe.
With My words,
You’ll be comforted.
My shoulder will hold your tears.
My ears, will listen to your every need.
My heart will bring you love.
My son will give you life.
I’m your Father,
And you’re my daughter.
Never forget that I love you.
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This might be slightly off-topic, as conversations with God (until we're with Him in heaven) aren't really face-to-face.
I love the "Father" aspect of God, and your poem captures that so well.