The Official Writing Challenge
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07/27/09
oh this is good. The dilemma and pressure of teens. I didnt take to the "bible bashing" evangelistic style of the preacher but clearly God was working through him to touch these youngsters . I was wondering why they were there so the jacket left behind explained this neatly. Well done!
Well-written and good message. I'll bet you won't be in Beginners for long.
Very impressive writing. I, too, thought the preacher seemed old-fashioned (not his message, but his tone and words), but the Lord used him to convict. I agree that you won't be in beginners for long. Good job!
07/29/09
Well told story of self-examination as the preacher speaks and the two changing hearts. Life as Teens does not have to rushed into. More could avoid collisions at the intersection! A fine wisdom message for youth.