The Official Writing Challenge
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04/11/09
Very appropriate story for this Easter season!

It started out to be a re-telling, but then it seemed as if it were being narrated by one of the disciples, or possibly another follower of Jesus...but if that's the case, he really wouldn't have used a comparison to a roller coaster.

I love the hope in your title, and the 'you are there' feel.