The Official Writing Challenge
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02/22/08
Very interesting POV, and a good Biblical selection for this proverb.
Powerful character study. Excellent writing. :)
02/24/08
Oh yes, this is a great POV. I'm sure these thoughts were out there that day. Keep on writing!
Laury
I think your perception of this would fit the character of Nicodemus or Joseph of Arimethea. They both questioned what the Sanhedrin were doing I love it.

I must say I found it heavy reading but I am not a prolific reader.

My suggestion- these are thoughts or unexpressed conversation- perhaps in inverted commas as a sililoquay (hope I spelled that right.)
I liked the perspective this was written from. A very good piece of writing! Thank you for sharing.