The Official Writing Challenge
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01/11/08
This read like a play to me--I could hear it. By adding some dialog tags and brushing up the punctuation this would be easier to read. I think you caught people's opinion of Noah very well.
01/11/08
This would make a nice tract.
I like the point of view.
It helps the reader if you put an extra space between paragraphs.
Good job. Keep writing.
01/11/08
Very good approach to the topic.

I'll just echo the previous commenters--work on formatting so that your piece is easier to read. Most people find that it works best to type without indenting, and single spaced. Then hit an "enter" at the end of each paragraph, and be sure that each speaker gets his own paragraph.

It should end up looking like this comment, with spaces between the paragraphs.

Clever idea--keep writing!
Good job capturing the peoples' opinion of Noah. A great idea for the topic.