The Official Writing Challenge
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11/30/07
Nice, tidy little devotional.

There's some missing punctuation in a few of the early sentences--easy to miss, and easy to correct with one more edit. I like the fact that you gave an example before the teaching part of the devotional.
12/03/07
I also like the illustration before the teaching in this devotional. I like how you brought the modern woman's mindset into the old story of Mary and Martha.
12/03/07
Enjoyed this read - nice application of a familiar story.