The Official Writing Challenge
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03/16/07
I almost could feel a crescendo as this progressed. I absolutely loved the stanza where satan hissed and Jesus had the key. This was very nicely done!
Wonderful presentation of the Gospel. Thanks for sharing your talent!
03/22/07
Well written and wonderful thoughts. Very well done
There is elegance here and drama reminiscent of Dante. In a few verses you have an epic that captures the essence of the gospel - all the way from Lucifer's rebellion when 1/3 of the angels followed him, to man's broken relationship with his Creator, then Christ and our redemption and victory in Him.