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11/18/06
You put a lot of ideas into this one article and you have a strong message here. Keep writing!
11/18/06
A delightful description of the pool activities, and a great message. I would have loved a better transition between the two, but truly did enjoy this. Keep writing!
11/19/06
Well thought-out.

It might move this piece up a notch if there were more parallels drawn between the pool stuff and the spiritual stuff.

Thanks for sharing this devotional!