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Excellent comparison in spiritual fire-fighters and regular ones. Good job.
10/13/06
Excellent analogy, well presented.
10/14/06
Very nicely done! Your comparison was clear and well documented. Good work.
Very nice job describing the firefighter's sacrifice. Good use of scripture with "Greater love has no man." I'm bit confused by the phrase " for the same" in the 6th paragraph? Could just be me.:) I loved this line: "It is a power sent for the backup gladiators, warring on their knees in the home trench."
Very good article. Wonderful pov. Good job.