The Official Writing Challenge
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09/01/06
Very nice transition from sorrow to joy. A few changes to the meter would help it be more readable, but it is a blessing just as it stands.
09/04/06
AMEN indeed! What a lovely piece! I love the whole way you approached this, and have many favorite stanzas. I agree about the meter - but truly enjoyed it regardless!!
This is very well done. The message is very clear, and your poetry, I can't fault. Perfection to be sure.

Keep writing and sharing.