The Official Writing Challenge
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Well done! You pulled me right in. Great technique, toggling between the prayers of the mother and the train of thought in the daughter. You built to a good, strong ending, and you painted the pictures effectively.
Watch for sneaky little spelling and grammatical slips, and work on developing more 'sizzle' in your verbs and adjectives. Doing your final polish with an online thesaurus is a great tool. Keep up the good work!
06/06/06
Very interesting! Prayer opens the door for the Holy Spirit to work. God has blessed you with a gift for writing well. Thank you!