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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 1 – Beginner)
Topic: End (02/13/06)

TITLE: God
By Cheryl Harrison
02/17/06


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God
He is
Eternal
Father, Spirit
And Jesus the Son
Alpha and Omega
Creator of everyone
Who was and is and is to come
He is my shelter, to Him I run
He is my God, my redeemer and friend
He will be with me until the very end
He promises to remove all my guilty stains
He is God of the hopeless, the hurting and the shamed
The true light of the world, His reflection always remains
On the face of every believer, all the world to see
To reach the brokenhearted and to encourage the free
For all the sins of the world, He died upon the tree
All my sins forgiven, my heart is his alone
I belong to Him, my life is not my own
And as His child I am never alone
He knew me before heaven and earth
Anticipating my new birth
Heaven danced when I said yes
To the gift of Jesus
His beloved Son
The only way
Eternal
He is
God



I am the Alpha and the Omega, the First and the Last, the Beginning and the End.
Revelation 22:13 NIV



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Lynda Schultz 02/20/06
And it even speaks on the page before you read the words - very interesting. Well done.
Jan Ackerson 02/22/06
This is very good! I don't usually enjoy these "pattern" poems, but this one really spoke to me; you did a great job.
Shari Armstrong 02/22/06
Very creative-well done.
Crista Darr02/23/06
I like it. You've presented the gospel message in a unique way. It read very well. Good job.
Jeffrey Snell02/23/06
Good job! It's fun to experiment, huh? You pulled it off nicely...
David Story02/23/06
Powerful.
Great piece. Thanks.
Kate Wells02/23/06
Beautiful! It seemed to dance as I read it aloud. I loved this... Kate~
Garnet Miller 02/23/06
How beautiful. I thank God that he is my Jehovah Shalom and Jehovah Rapha and Jehovah Nissi. No matter what name we use, it is still above all others and well worth the praise!
Simply beautiful poem.
Anita Neuman02/23/06
You say you "tried your hand" at poetry? No way. This is not the work of a novice! It's absolutely beautiful! I found the link to the topic rather vague (although I have to admit: it could be staring me in the face and I'm too tired to see it right now). Congratulations, though. This is wonderful!
Linda Watson Owen02/23/06
Wonderful job on this delightful and inspiring poem! Another possible pattern could be to center the whole poem on the page and have a diamond star pattern. I enjoyed this!
Marilyn Schnepp 02/24/06
Great pattern, great message, great creative work - but a bit shy on the topic "END"...But absolutely a masterpiece in talent. I know this was time consuming, and you pulled it off gracefully, beautifully and creatively. Kudos!
Julianne Jones02/24/06
Very impressive. I hope you're planning on 'trying your hand' at poetry again. This was well done and I liked the way the beginning and the end connected - in fact, I could picture them as a circle - without end, a symbol of eternity.
Lynda Lee Schab 02/25/06
Loved, loved, loved it. Not only was it creative and different, the words were masterfully thought-out and extremely poetic. You have a gift for this type of writing.