The Official Writing Challenge
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A heartfelt prayer, and a good way to start the day. Watch for common spelling errors: roll / role and to / too. A few edits for punctuation, and this will be a tidy dialog. Thanks for sharing so freely.
A chaotic household - I can completely relate. Nicely done, but watch spelling and punctuation closely. Using 'firstly' usually asks for second, third, etc., and is usually 'first.'
The world would be so much easier to handle if it weren't for the people in it, but … thank the Lord that He is sufficient in helping us face a "peopled" world. You could have left out the "Lord's reply" in those couple of paragraphs. We would have known who was speaking and it would have made your prayer more of a dialogue with God. You're doing well.