The Official Writing Challenge
This article has been read 774 times
Member Comments
Member
Date
11/29/05
You've got some good thoughts here, but they seem a little disjointed. Don't be discouraged, though - your vulnerability draws us in and your message is great. Keep writing!
11/29/05
I enjoyed how you wrote as though you were just being yourself, and including the reader. Very open thoughts. God bless ya, littlelight