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11/21/05
I love the last sentence of your first section. I learned some things about Australian winter and Christmas--thank you!
11/21/05
Enjoyed your story..and love hearing about Australia..I could only imagine..(LOL) No place like home. Nice post. God bless ya, littlelight
11/23/05
Very nice descriptive language. Put a space between paragraphs to make it easier to read.
11/26/05
I love the contrast between Jane's old home and new home. You've used words really beautifully too. I was right there in the middle of your wet and cold winter in 'the homeland' ... although walking across the tarmac in scorching heat isn't that strange, is it?! :-)