The Official Writing Challenge
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A nice story to put in poem form. I like the four lines for each verse and the rhyming words.

Work at keeping each line the same length so the rhythm as you read will be the same.

Yes, those who know can speak the truth right from the horse's mouth.
11/23/13
Wow - G r e a t J O B!
Beautiful, simply beautiful.

God bless~
This is lovely. I wasn't sure how you were going to pull the topic in, but you did it in a fresh and creative way. Congratulations on ranking 6th in your level and 24 overall! (the highest rankings can be found on the message boards).