The Official Writing Challenge
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11/07/13
Awww. This gave me chills and made me smile. I love stories where the lost are found and the blind suddenly see!

Well done!

God bless~
11/07/13
Well written story. I think the characters were believable and the dialogue rang true.
Very well written short story. It seems very well laid out as it was easy to read and follow.

Could be "true to life".

Your descriptions in the first part were good and helped lead into the story.

Write some more. Short stories might be for you.
11/11/13
This is a well written story. Your characters are real and believable.

Keep up the good work!
11/14/13
Congratulations on your well deserved 2nd place award.
11/14/13
Congratulations!

God bless~
Congratulations on ranking 2nd in your level and 22 overall! (The highest rankings can be found on the message boards)