The Official Writing Challenge
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11/07/13
Great message in this lovely poem, along with truth and inspiration.

God bless~
11/07/13
Your poem really follows the theme this week. I like how you contrasted faith and unbelief.

Don't forget to put the "s" on the end of the word pig in each line.
Easy to read and understand. I like that.

Faith comes when we listen to God's word with an open heart.Repentance and obedience will cause our hope to fly.

I also like all the rhyming words.
This is a lovely poem. I especially like the title line. Life is a choice. I think it's easy to get wrapped up in the why me mentality instead of having faith and letting God be God. Nicely done.
11/14/13
I like this. It is very readable and seemed to flow with ease. Keep writing.