The Official Writing Challenge
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09/14/13
I am surprised this writing has not got more comments. I thought It was a good and well written devotional. You stayed true to the topic.

If you are new to the site, you may want to check out the forum for the Brick-Throwing thread, where you can post your entry and hopefully get more feedback. I wish you well, God bless, and keep writing.
09/16/13
You touched a little bit of everything so the main focus got side-tracked at times but overall a good article.
I liked your good common sense and how you ended.

God is the source of all wisdom (and technically) all knowledge.

Your article was easy to read. It flowed nicely.

I feel when you got started, it came easily for you. It may have taken more time to check it over than it did to write it.

It is a nice write.