The Official Writing Challenge
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There is a lot of truth in this writing. (sorry to say)

This was easy to read and seemed to flow nicely.

For me it is harder to see where there is need for corrections when it seems an easy read.

09/14/13
We will leave it to the Holy Spirit, He is the expert. I like that! Well written and on topic. Keep writing.
09/15/13
You made a very strong point, & delivered it with such ease. Your piece is short & straight to the point. I like it.
09/23/13
During the break in the Weekly Challenge schedule, Id like to invite you to the FaithWriters forums, where Im holding a weekly free class in various writing strategies. Participation is strictly voluntary, but I give free and timely feedback on all contributions. Id love to have you drop by! http://www.faithwriters.com/Boards/phpBB2/viewforum.php?f=67
09/23/13
During the break in the Weekly Challenge schedule, Id like to invite you to the FaithWriters forums, where Im holding a weekly free class in various writing strategies. Participation is strictly voluntary, but I give free and timely feedback on all contributions. Id love to have you drop by! http://www.faithwriters.com/Boards/phpBB2/viewforum.php?f=67