The Official Writing Challenge
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09/12/13
An excellent take on the topic. Expert in love: that is Christ. You worded this wonderfully; I'm thinking it should place very well.
This is always a worthwhile subject.

Jesus subjected himself to his Father. He obeyed him even in his death.

We also now have to yield to our LORD by obeying what he has commanded us.

I do like, though, rhythm and rhyme for my poem.
So true. This is great!
09/23/13
During the break in the Weekly Challenge schedule, Id like to invite you to the FaithWriters forums, where Im holding a weekly free class in various writing strategies. Participation is strictly voluntary, but I give free and timely feedback on all contributions. Id love to have you drop by! http://www.faithwriters.com/Boards/phpBB2/viewforum.php?f=67