The Official Writing Challenge
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06/01/13
WOW - this was excellent...I got the chills with this clever, hearfelt and powerful piece.

This came form the Spirit within, lovely, simply lovely. Thank you for touching my heart.

God Bless~
06/05/13
What a clever entry (beginning with your title-that in retrospect is brilliant). Great work with this!
This is quite clever. I really could relate to the pain of the MC. The only part I stumbled with is at first I didn't count the title as a line, but once I figured which every other lines you meant I was in awe. This is unique and does have the Holy Spirit's fingerprints all over it. Outstanding bit of writing.
I meant Salutation not title, sorry about that. Either way though once I "got it" it made a world of difference.
06/06/13
Congrats! God bless~
Magnificent! Congratulations! How wondrous your threading. Praise God . . .