The Official Writing Challenge
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05/27/13
Very interesting story, and extremely unique and clever.

God bless~
This is an interesting story. You did a nice job of showing the interruptions of the day. I think I got the ending, though I wasn't a 100%. If we do things to help others while patting ourselves on the back, when a real angel unaware turns up at the door,. we may send him away and miss out on the package in his hand. I think some people may scratch their heads at the end or it could just be it took my tired brain a few rereads to get it. I do think it's a great message. While it is important to immerse ourselves in God's word, we also must care for those he sends our way. Good job.
05/30/13
Congrats! God bless~