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05/27/13
Wow...this was an intense read, it really was powerful in its content and held my attention. Great ending! Dreams, are revealing and so many times in the Bible, things were done through "dreams."

Great piece!

God bless~
I liked this story. You did a nice job of showing the pain of the MC. Often the dream, but not really a dream device can be overused in literature, but I enjoyed your message with this story. It's a great way to visualize Jesus and Satan--complete opposites. Nice job.
05/30/13
Congrats! God Bless~
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