The Official Writing Challenge
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This is an interesting take on John the Baptist. I felt a bit confused as I read it and it might have helped if you had included that detail in the story, but it could just be me and others might have recognized it immediately. I think you have some terrific descriptions in this story and it's an interesting take on the topic. Good job.
05/26/13
Interesting read...I enjoyed this. Nice job.

Blessings, Lynn
05/27/13
Very different approach to the topic at hand. Good job with this piece. God bless~