The Official Writing Challenge
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This is an interesting take on John the Baptist. I felt a bit confused as I read it and it might have helped if you had included that detail in the story, but it could just be me and others might have recognized it immediately. I think you have some terrific descriptions in this story and it's an interesting take on the topic. Good job.
Interesting read...I enjoyed this. Nice job.

Blessings, Lynn
Very different approach to the topic at hand. Good job with this piece. God bless~