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Powerful allegory. Be careful with sentence arrangement; e.g. the seventy times seven made me wonder was it the sin or the forgiveness. A little editing and this essay could go far. Keep writing.
You did a fantastic job with this piece! I was pulled in immediately, and I thought this was sheer genius in how you used the topic at hand. Nice job! God bless~
This piece shows great potential. Captivating from the beginning but a bit "clunky" in the middle. Enjoyable, profound and creative, you have a gift, thank you for sharing it.
I thought the way you told this story gave one much room for thought. It kept one's interest. Good job!
Powerful! What a tribute to your/our Lover . . .
I found myself engulfed in your article. It was dynamic and helps one to realize we have an Awesome God that would do anything for His bride to the point of death. Keep Writing.
Congratulations on ranking 7 in your level and 25 overall!