The Official Writing Challenge
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Short and sweet. This is very nicely done, but I'd love to see you flesh out the main character more. It would be a wonderful start to a longer piece.
I agree with Glynis, I want more of Sarah. Nicely written. Keep Writing!
This is really interesting. The fact that I want to know more about Sarah shows that you did a nice job of bringing me into that character. it's not always easy to find more words when you get to the heart of the message (Though I have the opposite problem and often have to cut words--lots of words!)

One way to add more words is to do more showing and less telling. A good way to do that is to have dialog. Perhaps there could have been a nice little old lady (maybe a bit nosey) asking Sarah where she was headed and why. Another way would be to avoid passive verbs like was and replace them with what Jan calls salsa verbs. (from the message boards' Jan's Writing Basics:

You did do a great job of writing on topic and I really enjoyed reading this. I think you did a nice job of showing Sarah's heart. Your message is a good one too. it's not always easy to follow God's calling but boy is it so worth it when we do. Keep writing what God puts on your heart. :)