The Official Writing Challenge
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02/23/13
This was a very interesting approach to the subject. Quick moving too. Nicely done.

God bless~
Whoo - hoo! I'm keyed up reading this. You've made some key points with your summation, worthy of reflection. Well done.
I have to be honest, when i first saw the long laundry list, I was tempted to just skim over it. I'm so glad I didn't and I feel sorry for those who did as it set the tone and pace for the rest of your story. I thought it might get tiresome, but about a quarter way down the list I found myself smiling and thinking how clever and creative this piece was. I delighted in reading it from beginning to end!